Episode I Script
First Snippet

Ext. Space
After Crawl, use entire shot of ship approaching and heading toward TF ships.

Int. Qui Gonn's ship
Reverse the first two interior shots-- start favoring Qui Gonn, 
Q: "Captain, tell them we wish to board at...
Cut to wide shot of all passengers
Q: "once..."
Captain: "Yes Sir."
Cut to Med. Shot of Captain as she leans toward controls-- cut away before she talks--

Ext. Space
Use whole shot of ship descending toward TF Starship. Bring up Sound F/X. No dialogue.

Int. Landing dock
Use frame-rate to slow down the landing and add more majestic music for truly awesome 
Star Wars landing (like Millenium Falcon landing on Death Star)

Int. Hallway
TC13 greets the Jedi. 

Int. Waiting Room
TC 13 leads Jedi into the waiting room and leaves. 
The Jedi flip back their hoods-- 
(Change if possible: using the Full Screen edition, can we crop the same shot and create 
a close up of Qui Gonn as he flips back his hood? It would be great-- even if we can just 
use the Full Screen footage to create a closer shot of both of them as they reveal 
themselves. The current shot favors Obi Wan -- since he's the one OT character we're 
meeting. That's not appropriate for this edit if we can get around it).

Can we improve the musical sting of their reveal? Harps isn't much of a cue.

Then back to the master shot as they walk across and say their lines at the window. 

(But again, depending on what's possible with the Full Screen version -- close ups of Qui 
Gonn's bored expression here would help reinforce his malaise about this assignment.)


More later...